Writing Together

WALT (We Are Learning To) make our writing more interesting!!

Jack, Angus, Leeym and Ms J wrote these two stories together focussing on making our writing interesting for our audience - YOU

Red helmet, black gloves, amazing BMX racing bike - now he's off to kick some butt!
The competitors are ready to rock and roll round the race track.
The gate is up. The riders are balancing...
Red Yellow Green
Bang! The gate crashes down.
The riders blast off down the gate ramp.

Storm helped out with this one too.

Zoom! Cicadas fly off like jets.
Their spiky toes will pinch you if you're not cunning - ow!
The larvae (baby cicadas) live underground for protection from bigger predators.
Bugs, creepy crawlies, beetles, insects - that's my family - I'm a cicada.
"Shush! Be quiet you'll scare me away."
When you are cicada hunting you have to be silent.
zzt, zzt, zzt, zzt,zzt, zzt, zzt, zzt...