Wooosh! A blast of hot steam puffed out like a train as we took off the hot sheets. We heaved out the wire case. There were cabbage leaves on the bottom so the Hangi didn't burn. There were colourful roast veggies and the most tenderest juiciest wild pork ever mixed together with a smell of manuka.
By Timu
yum wish i was there sounds delicious
ReplyDeleteWooosh! A blast of hot steam puffed out like a train Awesome simile Timu.
ReplyDeleteit was an incredible start to your story.
ReplyDeleteThat was by Wini
ReplyDeleteI like the similes like Wooosh! A blast of hot steam puffed out like a train.
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Wooosh! A blast of hot steam puffed out like a train. I can see it so clearly. Good Visualization
ReplyDeleteyum wish I was there
ReplyDeleteA blast of hot steam puffed out like a train as we took off the hot sheets! Love the similes Timu! Wish I was there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThere were colourful roast veggies and the most tenderest juiciest wild pork ever mixed together with a smell of manuka. OH!!!! yeah that would be the boom and I wish that I was there
ReplyDeleteLove the part when you said the colorful roast
ReplyDeleteveggies and what you said about the roast pork. An unbelievable story cus you really got the taste for food from your cousin Jahdan. Good Job bro.
The hangi must smell nice. I can see hot steam puffing.
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